- Erotic Poetry
- Loving My Neighbour
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Click hereCome touch me
Come hither
Come to me tonite
I lay here alone
And wait for your call
Moving I hear you
T'other side of my wall
In an envelope I've left you
A sweet mystery
Mmmm can you guess
To my door it's the key
The clock it has stopped
The sheets they are white
Let nothing cum tween us
Not even the night
- COMMENTS
xwriterxxxalmost 13 years agoAuthorProbably not unfair and quite nicely put by both parties. :). Just wanted to get something up there... As the old saying goes...
Will try and do butter next time. Especially re the banal part!!! :)
UnderYourSpellalmost 13 years agoI hope it's supposed to be funny too because does anyone actually say 'To my door it's the key'? If it's not supposed to be hilarious I beg your pardon too but it gave me the giggles :)
twelveoonealmost 13 years agoIt's funny, I hope it was meant to be, if it wasn't these are really bad:
Let nothing cum tween us
T'other side of my wall
The total banality of these two lines:
The clock it has stopped
The sheets they are white
has to be deliberate.
If I'm wrong, keep the score, delete the comment, and try not to do it again.
