Luna (Moon)



By JCSTREET © 2004

La luna palida lamenta
sobre mi nino
congelado en el polvo
como las hojas de invierno
enterrado en la nieve

mientras el agua quieta
se salpica en las laderas
oigo sus risas sin parar
en la noche
en la manana
sin parar
su sollozo
sin parar

colgado como cuerda rota
cerca de mi puerta



The pale moon laments
my child
frozen in the dust
like Winter’s petals
frozen in the snow

and yet the quiet water
spatters in the hills, I

hear its laughter without cease
at night
without cease
at morning
without cease
the sobs
without cease

draped like broken thread
around my door


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