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Click hereI am cool rock, his eternal mirror
He is raw energy wrapped in flames
We live suspended in time and space
nowhere and everywhere at once
Ours is the first affair, a story for the ages
We define discretion, never for the world to see
We rendezvous in the galaxy
our secrets kept by stars
Day never meets night, is the cardinal rule
The blue marble lies between us
and hers is a green-eyed love
I sort of feel sorry for them, and not. There is something rather sexy about unrequited love and unconsummated lust. Poetry that has aspects like this interwoven, human and science really appeals to me. good work :)
Another fantastic poem. The last line is beautiful: "and hers is a green-eyed love." Not sure if I like the use of blue marble. Maybe I've heard that expression too often. But that's only a minor thing. The poem is good. :)
What a novel idea? Earth and moon in an ageless celestial dance to find favour with the sun. Amazing what images you can use to describe human lust, longing, and passion.
This is really good, I like the reference to jealousy and envy when it comes to as unlikely a triad as we three, Earth, Moon and Sun. Very lyrical although I think you could snip away a few pronouns and still keep the subject illuminated... Mentioned in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.