Lunar Eclipse

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It is late August, in the dark early morning.
A resplendent full moon is in the southwestern sky,
and my three cats have congregated around my feet,
perhaps wondering why I am out here
in the grass with them.

A shadow, like a fingertip touching
a nightlight, is touching the top
of that cold planet of a planet
which sometimes seems to hang
too proudly, too defiantly, too brightly

in the dark sky. At times like these,
she powders her face with the stars,
seeming to sweep them from the sky
with her harsh brush of light, which also
drops her silvery stellar powder on grass and trees.

She is to be humbled, this morning.
Looking later, she is bitten, like a Danish
wedding cookie: some mouth has taken
a bite out of the top of her. There is a trace
of red: the Earth wears lipstick.

And now she is gone. I feed my confused
cats early, this morning, under the strange and
abject darkness of a full moon, a moon which
has been swallowed by a darkness which
I stand upon and help, by being solid, to create.

The stars around her are released, for now.
She will return, that luminous face, but I
feel my own shadows encroaching. I submit,
finally, to my bed, willing my own stars to escape,
wondering if I too will be able to reappear.


~
tm/ 8-28-07

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautifully written ...

and I love the images. Here is a poet, a writer, who captures the emotion of what to other folks would only be a regular summer night. The rhyming in "Lunar Eclipse" is intuitive, not forced. Smooth and effusive like a solid ballad. Very lovely, indeed.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Don't misss this wonderous poem!

A wise deep and sensitive poem I will cut a printout and read it to others. How inspiring! The best i've read for a while.

swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
Lovely..

These lines caught me the most.."I submit,

finally, to my bed, willing my own stars to escape,

wondering if I too will be able to reappear." Beautiful poem..thank you for sharing!

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