Magic

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Hyades
Hyades
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You are the magic in my life
You have made things appear and disappear
You have made my own self made inadequacies
Vanish into thin air with your tender loving care;
Then the fear of voicing my opinion dissolves into nothing.
You make my desires appear when I think of you
Whether in dreams by day or night.

What makes my nipples appear hard, erect, and aching?
The magic touch of your hand and tongue.
You're the one who's magical voice
Makes me tremble with delight.
The magic of having you near
Lights my face with a smile
And my eyes with love.

Hyades
Hyades
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fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
I love that you continue to post here

but your poems don't appear to grow. I went and read a few of your other poems. If I were the addressee I would be delighted, but here on a poetry forum they are jaded and cliched. Look around you and read--there are splendid examples of how to hymn a lover without recourse to dull language.

I only write this because anyone can write one poem, but you have written many which makes me think you would like to write better Take a look at the poems on the site and the Forum and you may see how you can. Best wishes.