- Erotic Poetry
- Magical Moments
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Take me in your arms
Hold me tight and don't let go
Lay down with me
And lets make love
Nice and slow
The better it gets the deeper you go
Soft sweet kisses all over
Both of us giving and recieving in equal amounts
It's so much more than we ever thought possible
When I'm wrapped up in your arms the whole world fades away
Just the two of us in this moment
Time seems to stand still
And those magical moments last forever
Moments of passion and pleasure
Moments of deep love and pure lust
Do you know what you do to me
Have you any idea at all
Everything inside of me is needing you and wanting you
To be with you loving you so completely
And when we make love I want to feel you in my soul
Loving me to the core
The very essence of your love penetrating and sinking down deep
So that is fuses together a connection so strong it can't be broken
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agoPoetry is the souls release into words...and your's shined bright, very nice poem.
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe theme is familiar and so are the words.
The poet does not say anything new
nor in a fresh way.
There may be a germ of a poem somewhere
inside the prolixity,
but it will need much pruning and rearranging.
Reduce redundancy
Remove
words
not needed
