Make Believe Melter

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Liar
Liar
59 Followers

Fine,
at least we know now
that your stasis is the basics,
while I move.

And that an anchor cord
would tear roots and cut bleeding
into winds and rivers.

One passing out
through my lips,
the other going in.

I drown another blighter
bursting bubble
in banter and bourboun,
this aimless all nighter.
Counting hours in the sweat beads
trickling down another
aimless hunter's
delectable throat.

There's a winter rising outside
and a winter raging within.

But this room is Amalfi,
Tarragona, del Mar at midnight...
And the sway lulls us to
defrost and redefine
such a petty detail as places.
Everywhere all yours now
and everything all mine.

So fine,
be stasis, rock, ice, whatever,
tomorrow.

But for this moment,
sip your silly straw soother,
and run your golden arms
so much smoother
against my last resistance.

There is a clue to all of this
somewhere, I do belive.
But it will find me tomorrow,
when the winter outside
has tightened it's claws
and the winter within
has melted.

Liar
Liar
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flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
A joy to read

What a wonderful experience, to simply let this one trip off the tongue and savor the sounds! Thanks, Liar.

echoes_sechoes_sover 19 years ago
I love how this all sounds so natural

This was my favorite...

I drown another blighter

bursting bubble

in banter and bourboun,

this aimless all nighter.

Counting hours in the sweat beads

trickling down another

aimless hunter's

delectable throat.

is the prey a willing victim ? :heart:

There is a clue to all of this

somewhere, I do belive.

But it will find me tomorrow,

How I have missed reading and everyone here on Lit

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
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I like the conversational tone—the voice compliments this cryptic, crafty poem of yours, Liar.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Your poem

has been mentioned in the Halloween New Poem Reviews

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailover 19 years ago
Chilly piece~

There is a clue to all of this

somewhere, I do belive.

But it will find me tomorrow,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Don't count on it! MET

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