Make Me

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Make me smile
Make me beam
Make me laugh
Make me dream
Make me burst
at the seam
and I will follow you

Make me moan
Make me shake
Make it more
then I can take
Leave me breathless
as I wake
and I will love you

Make me scream
Make me cry
Make me wish
that I could die
Make me think
that I can fly
and I will worship you

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tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
DO THIS FOR/TO ME

tis better to give than receive. NOT...TK U MLJ LV NV

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
you push the rhythm

Right to the limit in this, normally when a poem repeats so often I can't finish reading which is sad sometimes because there may be good stuff that I miss, but the rhyme and rhythm drive this at a pace that I didn't get a chance to turn off, the end of line break adds a pause before the beat pushes on again. Thanks for getting me to the end :-)

cool_whispercool_whisperalmost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you Oldbear

I appreciate the feedback and thank you for the smile it brought.

Oldbear63Oldbear63almost 10 years ago
Very sexy, very well done

I liked how the intensity increased. Well done, young lady.

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