- Erotic Poetry
- Make Me Obey
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Click hereOur electricity burns white hot,
Searing into my mind.
Delightedly I ride the waves,
Screaming with every cell.
So right. So raw. Domination.
This submissive heart thunders,
At the eye of His storm.
Overwhelmed, overpowered, I am where I belong,
Our dynamic, so primal.
My Mate makes love,
Seething intensity,
Taking and providing and commanding.
Break me gently; have me hard.
Demand all that I am.
I offer you everything,
Belong to you.
Wake my beastie.
Your Animal is hungry for her,
As she is for you.
Warrior,
Take me with you,
Wherever you go.
- COMMENTS
visioneeralmost 8 years agoOne of the best D/s themed poems I've encountered on Lit. This is a beautiful, powerful line:
"This submissive heart thunders,
At the eye of His storm."
greenmountaineeralmost 8 years agoNicely done, Sara.
"Break me gently; have me hard" has to be the erotic line of the week.
