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Click hereMake Me Your Bad Habit
Make me your bad habit.
You want, you see, you grab it.
I wanna be truly your one weakness.
The whore for all your freakness.
Feel me up, inside and out.
Show me, there is no doubt.
I need to tease you.
Please let me please you.
Thoughts of you in me.
Wrestle and pin me.
Suck me!
Fuck me!
Lick me!
Dick me!
Oh baby, I won't let you kick me.
I wanna be your vice.
Cuz, yeah, I'm oh soooo nice.
Let me entice.
You.
interesting writing..shows the emotion of wanting to be used at will in all the ways..yet no kicking..i understand..could he call you names?
I give this a 5 just because I like it. Good rhythm and flow with rhymes that fall perfectly into place. A light poem with touches of humor. Good!
I would change the emphasis from "oh soooooo nice" to "ohhhhhhh so nice" Also get a three syllable adverb in front of entice in "let me entice".