- Erotic Poetry
- Masters Sweet Embrace
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blinded by a black cloth
tied tightly over my eyes
feeling hot candle wax
burning on my thighs
my hands now bound
just above my head
restraints on my ankles
fastened to the bed
nipple clamps in place
clinging at my breast
teeth biting at me
pulling at my flesh
a wet warm sensation
trickling down my skin
crimson red hand prints
left on me by Him
now His warm breath
i feel against my face
strong hands around my neck
my Masters sweet embrace
- COMMENTS
Tathagataabout 20 years agothe way it was written
Takes us step by step .
erotic without being over-wordy and too descriptive
Nice job
Thank you
YDDabout 20 years agoI'm glad you enjoy your master's attention enough to share.
Structurally you might have a stronger poem if you kept your meter (syllable count and emphasis in each line) more consistent. You might also consider joining the couplets into stanzas of four lines since that is how you present your rhymes.
"Masters" should be "Master's"
