- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Maturity
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Summer’s lover
Matures into
Winter’s fool
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 13 years agomight be better as:
Summer’s lover
matures
into winter’s fool
but a rather cliched concept, doesn't dig deep enough
ILienBagbyover 13 years agoPerfect poem! It tells a real story, and in only three lines and six words. The word "matures" is so excellent. It prepared us for one idea and delivers a turnaround that made this reader shake his head in admiration.
vrosej10over 13 years agoI like concision. Ditch the capitals though. There is a reason haiku did; They are distracting.
