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- May God forgive her .. I can't
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How long can you cry inside
these tears corroding
your very being?
not abandoned by a lover
but the deeper scalding
pain from a sister,
grown from the same womb,
so filled with vitriol
she purposely didn't
tell me .. my mother is dying.
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lorencinoover 14 years agoA clever blend
The language is so ordinary as you relax into the poem, then Zap! . . . and anger blends with mourning making the reader at one with the writer yet still an observer.
