- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Maybe I'll be a Buddhist...
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Tears in the rain- gone unnoticed
Painful emotions- gone unspoken
Crushing feelings of losing all focus
Impure thoughts of envy and vanity
Reaching for my God
Painful
Crushing
...In vein
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoStrong feelings here laid bare;
Boo offered some helpful thoughts on your thread;
in all things just remember, it's your feelings,
your soul, that's exposed.
Take guidance and suggestions from others,
but it's YOU that stands there exposed.
Liaralmost 19 years agofor a good title. And that one puts a fresh spin on the poem. Well done.
My Erotic Talealmost 19 years agoYour poem was mentioned in the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the journey in words~
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoTears in the rain- gone unnoticed
Painful emotions- gone unspoken
Liked it,
Thanks.
~ J
