Melt Down

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Head blasting.
Senses erupting.
Racing erratical thoughts,
spewing forth. Throwing up
minds dead weight.

Pounding parade, rushing ...
Throwing shots, of feverish
frustration. bam bam bam

Bammmm

Hear tattooing beat, of the
drummers. Using sticks of joy,
that turned torturous. Tightening
tendons, slamming into hates hut.

Marching across acres. Anointing
the temptation, to strike out.
Sluggish snails, slithering in the ally
of memory. Coating their slime
on the walls, of melt down.







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Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
HOT

Scorching as always

RF, good work!

Thanks.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
well written

just a little to metaforic needs to be more litteral.

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
the title of....

this was a tough one for me to work with. i couldn't even get anything to flow with it. you've done that. you've captured a mind when it is under a lot of duress. i love this little spot immensely:

slamming into hates hut.

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nicely done.........don

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
MELTING

Hey ryhme,

nice poem...<grin>

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sounds

like Deep Forest music...it has that transdance effect....nice pen...smiles/blue

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