melting snow

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Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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    melting snow
the last traces
      of her footprints
 
 
 
 

Kaishaku
Kaishaku
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Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Like the evaporation of the snow...

she fades as if never there. I love how you can explain so much in so few words, K. Another brief, but powerful piece here. <smile>

Vixxx

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Big emotions...

conveyed in a small piece.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
nice......

and the image carries after one finishes the read. little pieces make great openers in poetry books. i'm sure you know what i mean without explaining....again.......very nice piece.......don

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
very moving

so much said in such

a few words,

Thanks.

~ J

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
So much..

..in so little

b'brig

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