memories in the rain

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bluerains
bluerains
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sounds running down a jaded
 weeping deluge entrench a dreamer

scintilla slivers in crystal chards
linked in congealed intervals

a facination fairy tale alternates
cryptic isolation

animation exalts infatuation
with the moon goddess

the aurora bleeds teardrops
onto a lonely sea

bluerains
bluerains
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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Wonderful

I love the imagery and the phrasing.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Memories of the rain

I like this very much! Well chosen words and alliteration.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
There is

a japanese style of painting ( whose name escapes me) where you paint just a hint of things and leave much of the canvas blank.

You do that with your poetry

such fragile dreamlike images and yet

they create a wonderful mood and picture

You continue to inspire and amaze me

Thank you

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