Men I'd Like to Fuck #1 - Phil Burke
Admiration takes many forms
and he inspires two or three
in me. Respiration ups
the ante, my nostrils
flare on each inhale
to catch a whiff
of pheromones on theatrical
air, drifted from his
elegance upon the screen.
How long has it been
since my fingers stroked lean
muscle mass, lightly peppered
with baby fluff, on twenty-something
skin? Too long to make it so he'd look
at me with the same heat I burn
for him. It's been a decade since
my silhouette's been reminiscent of a MILF.
So, here in my mid-life,
middle-classed existence
I but sit in squirmed admiration.
If I squeeze my thighs tight together
and clench my pelvic floor I can still
induce youthful responses where it
matters most and where it
doesn't matter any more
how soft my flesh's become.
I really enjoyed all of these
not only for the cliché inversion of milf,
the yearning and wants are palpable, your descriptions flit between clinical and sexual which highlights the "middle aged" part, and helps to drive your main points home.
"I but sit in squirmed admiration" I feel this line may need a rework, the but where it is seems out of place to me.more...
That's witty you turned teenage male fantasy Moms I'd like .........on it's head !
I fived this just for the Role Reversal .
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