Men I'd Like to Fuck #4 - Robert Downey Jr.
How I wish we'd met before -
like twenty years ago
when I was fertile and in my prime
and you were just a younger man
but nothing scandalous to make old
ladies look askance at our daring
parade of lust and desire
out by the pool.
fuck...
I can picture your twenty-five
year old heat simply radiating out
to enthrall any woman with a nose
sharp enough to sniff out
the stamina that youth brings to bed
and oh, let me tell you, a thirty-
something woman can smell sex
when it walks by
yum...
encapsulated in a virile skin
of iron muscles, supple hide
and musky hormones every time
you take another step. Walk
past here, baby and I'll explain
that sex has nothing to do with want
but everything to do with need.
I love this one ;)
I think maybe this could be tweaked though
Walk
past here, baby and I'll explain
that sex has nothing to do with want
but everything to do with need.
It feels as if the pause should be after baby, like it puts a staccato stumble in an awkward place to my ear? or maybe delete the comma altogether, let the "baby" work as the pause beat, the "and" then does its job.more...
Encapsulated in a virile skin
Of iron muscles , supple hide
& musky hormones every time ......
........Iron Man Fangirl ......the Iron Champ !
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