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Click hereTwisted visions
turn me on. Cycling mea culpa
to an alternate world, in
another time. Where I rim out,
then in. Direct deep
breathing treatments
to the edge, back outward,
and orbit over. Twisting
opalescent beach bombs,
absorbing
his fresh plutonium.
Straight away, I frolic
down to taste
the destruction
of this lusty beaching
I long to command.
I always felt that extended imagery which is agile enough to sustain it's freshness throughout a whole poem is much more erotic (IMHO) then any direct 'naming. Live it to the mobilized reader to arrive at the erotic conclusion of each part of the imagery and the results are most likely to be measured on galactic a scale of explosiveness!
I always enjoy reading your frolic poetry (~_~) bows humble~
...maybe not so, but you have me imagining it. Thank you, I enjoyed.
I may not really understand the poem, but with this poem that's okay. It's wonderful to read.