Milky Way Meltdown

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Twisted visions
turn me on. Cycling mea culpa
to an alternate world, in
another time. Where I rim out,
then in. Direct deep
breathing treatments
to the edge, back outward,
and orbit over. Twisting
opalescent beach bombs,
absorbing
his fresh plutonium.
Straight away, I frolic
down to taste
the destruction
of this lusty beaching
I long to command.

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KOLKOREKOLKOREover 16 years ago
Highly loaded imagery...

I always felt that extended imagery which is agile enough to sustain it's freshness throughout a whole poem is much more erotic (IMHO) then any direct 'naming. Live it to the mobilized reader to arrive at the erotic conclusion of each part of the imagery and the results are most likely to be measured on galactic a scale of explosiveness!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 16 years ago
frolic poetry

I always enjoy reading your frolic poetry (~_~) bows humble~

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 16 years ago
Carry on

frolicking down and tasting lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Dirty, clever girl...

...maybe not so, but you have me imagining it. Thank you, I enjoyed.

WickedEveWickedEveover 16 years ago
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I may not really understand the poem, but with this poem that's okay. It's wonderful to read.

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