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Click hereMIND SEDUCTION – August 22, 1997
You entered my mind and enchanted my soul;
I felt your immortal presence but never saw you.
Your voice whispers in my ear.
Your words follow and pierce me;
Causing an inhuman desire,
A constant thirst that can not be quenched.
My body felt your dreamlike touch;
Your soft, hypnotic kiss caresses me.
Your mind seduction enslaves me.
You beckoned me to follow,
Knowing I would not deny my master.
You beckoned me to come,
Knowing I would obey.
And when I came.....
Your name was on my lips.
Well now "Dorothy,"
Welcome to Lit;
And I second Anna's thoughts about
Caps and lack thereof;
Those that use them might not see
It's a distracting style
And detracts from the message.
I like how you write to your master and still use a capital I. It shows to me, the importance of the "sub" who in my opinion, is the one who is really in control anyway. It also symbolizes, to me, the confidence in the relationship that allows both to retain identity.
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