- Erotic Poetry
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Click hereYou weep my unshed tears.
You bleed my blood gone dry.
You scream the voice I lost.
You fear whats in my eye.
You are my possession.
You are my absolution.
You suffer my hidden pain.
You beg with all my shame.
You smile with all my joy.
You shed the skin I tame.
You are my damnation.
You are my salvation.
You.. Are.. Me..
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineeralmost 9 years agoInteresting. I would have ended it after "You shed the skin I tame" because that's the best line I've read today, made even better following on the heels of "You smile with all my joy."
I don't think "You...Are...Me." was necessary since it was implied by the title of the poem, and it felt a bit anti-climactic after the dramatic affect of that killer line "You shed the skin I tame."
Enjoyable read, Darksymmetry. Thanks for posting it.
