Miss Patty has a good day

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Miss Patty was quiet.
Her feet moved quick.
He couldnt hear her slide in.
"Bend over".
He knew it was going to be tough.
He Drops his undie.
Because thats all he wore for her.
Miss Patty took out her 7 incher.
She unplugs his ass.
She fucks him hard.
She digs her nails as she digs in deep.
"TAKE it, you skinny HO"
"Miss Patty is waiting to go"
"Squeeze your ass, you little twit"
Fucks him hard.
She cums.
"Wipe the floor", hisses Miss Patty.
She walks on him barefoot with her feet light.
He is happy.

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monro3141monro3141over 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback

Using "ho" was jarring and it was something that I used reminding myself of the scene from My Cousin Vinny. I used it to rhyme a horrible excuse. It is still evolving. Thank you for reading them.

erectus123erectus123over 8 years ago
one of your better

submissive poems - is it the anal or the humiliating language that excites you more? It would be of interest if you would write about your mental state during these sessions or fantasy sessions. Getting inside your head rather than inside your ass would be more artful and thus more poetic.The "Ho" language is sharp and jarring but perhaps your reality. Keep it coming and deal with whether you cum from Patty's anal penetration? that is rarely the case, most subs are forbidden orgasm most of the time and only allowed to cum as a rare treat or reward. If this is your thing go for it, if and when you have had enough you may move on or stay a sub forever.

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