MLP~ Looking down on Heaven

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MLP~ looking down on heaven

as I view you
a thought or two
grew

I might have let you down
I don't really know
but I know
I left you low

There I was high again
naturally
looking down on Heaven

the Hawk had the wind
to help him in his lift
I had you
get my drift?

as I view you
I knew
it was you
that lifted me to this height

looking down on Heaven

you have always
looked up to me
yet it was I
beneath thee

your at the pearly gates
laughing
still looking up to me
with passion

I am still here
near
where you placed me
looking down on heaven

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templemindedtemplemindedover 18 years ago
when looking down

when i'm looking down you take a look up and around and guess what...i will still be found....somewhere by you, i will be around. :)

templeminded thanks you for your thoughts and words

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
Gave me .... chills ,

and thoughts,

of my own. and here I

read your words, looking

up.. from Heaven.

-sGp-

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

I like this here;

an interesting play on

points of view...