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as he dresses her in his gaze

he uncovers more nakedness

she preens and models shamelessly

the invisible clothes of his stare

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Clean

and simple... nothing weighs this beauty down :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Oh how you catch....

....an image and a mood with so few words. Great stuff.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
modelling

I like the poem and your style.

I might change "clothes" to "cloak" in the final line if it were my work.

"Cloak" has additional connotations with "viewing".

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Mmmmmmmm

how true.

I love this

a wonderful look at intimacy and voyeurism

: )

and done in your wonderful minimalist style

thank you, once again

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