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Click hereIn this moment I find there are no words to describe
The sensations I feel, the stirring going on inside
Though I know there will never be another time for you and I
Lets lie in this moment, not worrying as the seconds pass us by
A drug is the scent of your skin, like the intoxicating sounds you make
Beneath my lips is the silk of your neck tasting just the same
Every movement, every touch stills the pain I know tomorrow will bring
Yet your arms blanket me beneath the silent music the stars sing
The almond of your eyes contain the depthness of your soul
Exposing the heat that envelops me from this worlds cold
Words hold no meaning in this silence so loud
As you drop the defenses of the day, removing the shroud
Whispers of love and my promise to take you to another place
Where we are nothing, in the mix we are just another face
In this moment I lose the care of myself and my own burning need
Just the need to care for and protect you remains, and off that my soul feeds
Still your fears and silence your worries, to protecting you from monsters out and within
Leaving burning traces across you as my tongue moves across your skin
As if a match were lit I watch the fire of passion burn in your eyes
And I relish this moment, and wish that I could make still time
but I have to say this. Is <B>depthness</B> even a word? <B>Depth</B> would have sufficed. And you really need some punctuation. I am a huge fan of leave a comma out, when in doubt, but an apostrophe in Lets is so necessary.
I bet you could write this out and play with it a little bit and come up with a really good poem, but the rhyme is tedious in some places and good in others.
I hope you stick around and keep submitting, pop over to the poetry forum. It can be a grand learning experience if that is what you want, or you can just come to play which is about all that goes on anymore...
keep up the writing, I enjoyed reading you for the first time.
NJ
This poem was mentioned in Tuesday's New Poems Reviews.
Thanks for the read!