Moonlight

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madam_noe
madam_noe
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The roar of silence; a warm moonlit beach
Promises fall
He comes singing softly fathomless
Nightly stars call
Thundering pulse beckons, roaring
A living, breathing wall
Just a dream...

Twilight
Smoothly the ends of the earth crumble
Raindrops etch away under cover
The pulsing waves silence, snuffled
Turn in the dark to feel another
Excitement - covered with age pounding the dream of love
Comes a fantasy lover

Sliding skin; breath so hot
Sighs rising
The promie of a touch so beautiful
Keenly lay dying
Pounding of waves echoes free in the hollows
Left alone softly crying
Came the dream

madam_noe
madam_noe
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
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i think you are new;

sonically this is nice, be careful with it, poets tend to see it as a cheap effect, -ly. -ing

The promie of a touch so beautiful

Keenly lay dying

Pounding of waves echoes free in the hollows

Left alone softly crying

promie doesn't seem to fit in with the overall tone

be careful with it: although i admit i like

singing softly fathomless

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
THE ROAR OF THE OCEAN

the slapping of the waves upon the shore bathed in the moons rays. TK U MLJ LV NV

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