Moonlit Sonata

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White wash of moonlight
pours over his sleeping form
nude
face downward into pillow

fingertips soft as petals
across his sacrum
piloerections grow
in their wake

he stirs
sleepy-head look
and a sly smile

Moonlit sparkles
in his eyes
star-crossed kisses
trail my navel
south

his tongue a composer
of melodic moans
accelerando
to crescendo

head on my breast
my fingers in his hair
as the moon slips away
to the dawn

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor

Goose bumps... Couldn't quite find the right words there... Went with "good enough". Is funny, half the time I write I end up doing all kinds of research. With this one I learned about the origins of goosebumps and found the humorous/insightful "erogenous zones" Wikipedia page.

Glad you guys liked it. I'm going to try and do more erotica than I have been, so it's encouraging that you enjoy it lol.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
A perfect example of erotic writing

I'll have to look up piloerections, but I think I got them. "a composer of melodic moans."

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
beautiful

and sensual, love this one Lesse :-)