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Click hereHow absolutely wondrous
Was God’s creation of Eve
So thoughtful and insightful
Of this I do believe
Like clay he smoothed her skin
To bring out the glow of her warmth
Rounding her body delicately
To fit in Adam’s arms
Her lips like two soft crescents
Made to laugh and whisper his name
Pouting, puckered, pleading
Things would never be the same
The moons at her fingertips
Used in comfort, help and fun
Matched perfectly with Adam’s
Twined to make them feel as one
Her breasts like twin moons
Luminous, firm, yet soft
For Adam to rest his head
As they gazed at the stars aloft
With hips and buttocks matching
The lunar roundness of her breasts
Curving out from belly and waist
For his hands to gently rest
Her greatest gift lay hidden
Where lovely legs did meet
Wrapped in hair so soft and velvet folds
For his sword to tightly sheath
I so wish, I had seen his face
As he gazed at the wonderful sight
Of this gift, that God did make for him
A friend, a lover, his life
metaphores comparing Eve to the moon were creative, I would have struggled to find so many comparisons in the human anatomy but you truly showed me up. ;) My only criticisms would be minor rhyme and punctuation questions; I'll leave it up to you if you want them. <3