Morbid Dance

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MINKX
MINKX
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Life is flashing fast.
My youth lies in the past.
Good times they just slid by.
Dear God I ache to die.

Fuck a "bright" new day.
Just take me far away.
The hurt it goes on growing.
The tears they keep on flowing.

I don't have a decent chance.
I hate this morbid dance.
Please God take my breath.
Fold me in arms of death.

Can't I just give up?
Sip that poisoned cup?
It hurts too much to try.
My soul it pleads to fly.

Don't stand in my way.
Or beg for me to stay.
If only you could see.
Life has no place for me.

Just another simple, lil...from "back then offering."

MINKX
MINKX
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Heathen HemmingwayHeathen Hemmingwayover 18 years ago
I loved it

" I don't have a decent chance. I hate this morbid dance." How very cool, paints clear images of that all too familiar feeling of dread we feel ~ sometimes on a very regular basis. Wonderful, sound poem. Great use of simple terms. Keep writing!

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Dancing Woe ~

Wowza.

Glad to see your feeling

better now. Think we have all

been in that spot in time.

Where we wish ... for change.

Then something, someone

comes into our lives.

Whether a friend or lover.

Brings the sun back out,

and happiness reigns supreme ~

Nice dark poem here.

Very * Morbid * ... Moody piece.

Huggs to you my friend ~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Desolation~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Damn girl!

Glad you're past

that back then period

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