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Click hereMy darling keeps me
In suspense.
She teases
She tantalises,
She has me hanging in
Anticipation
She is a darling, though,
I wouldn’t change her
For all the world.
She is sweet,
She is sexy,
She is all woman.
She makes me hard,
She makes me cum,
She is superwoman.
I send her kisses,
I send my heart,
Although she teases
She will keep her promises
I know.
There is too much repetition with the words in this piece. "She is" and more. I wanted more when I read. MORE of what she does to you. Feeling wise.
I'm going to read the other poetry as well. I want to REALLY feel drawn in by your work.
Never to hurt and only to help-
Dana