Morning Glory...

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IMspidey
IMspidey
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~ Morning Glory ~

Light plays
upon her cheeks
her neck, her back
in all her glory
light cascading
permeating
my love in allegory
by chance, to glance
softly to place
a kiss upon her lips
all at once
to bring to life
my love
my morning glory

Michael H. Bodor
Copyright © 2011

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IMspideyIMspideyalmost 13 years agoAuthor

Thank You,

I wish they could all be diamonds, but alas we do but what we can and seek to improve...

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
Yo, spidey

I received a reply, ostensibly from you. What I have seen is highly cliched, i.e. not new. I don't care what you think of your work or how you go about it, all of it can be better. Now if, you get off your pedestal, and took a look at mine, it should become obvious I don't recommend writing for the masses. Nor do I recommend even trying to write like me. But, if you do go around and look at other peoples work, and comment this gets you to thinking about possibilities in your own material. It is also a nice thing to do, and lets others know you don't think of yourself as being on a pedestal. This time I voted, a overly generous 4.

Thank you, I'll look for the same amount of comments from you as I see submissions. Because so far I see yours as shelf space clutter.

P.S. I'm glad you have a fan. They generally are the worst people to listen to, unless they're paying you.

P.S.S regarding money in poetry, the best paid writers work for Hallmark, your work does not measure up to their standards. i.e. even they have newer material.

lovewordslovewordsalmost 13 years ago
I like it

I thought it was beautiful.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
a little

better, some parts almost work for me. Here is what I suggest. Strongly. Go through new poems. Read the comments. Preferably the ones with real comments. Read the poem. Comment on a few. Read some that have no comments. You will start to see the difference. I did not vote.