Morning My Love

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Part 1 of the 2 part series

Updated 09/07/2022
Created 09/29/2005
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She dozes, dreams away.
While he, wants to play.
Partially parts, sleeping thighs.
Tongue begins a lapping dive.

Hot, tight crevices, he does
clean. Awakening with a smile,
she knows ... his scheme. Wiggles
letting loose, spastic seasonings
stream.

Sated ... Satisfied is she.
Rolling him over, answering
his plea. Saddling upon his
horn of need. Bareback riding,
she breaks in, his steed.

Galloping away with the wind.
His spirit runs, seeps into skin.
Guttural whimpers, letting loose.
Loving, his early morning Muse ...

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Yup! That's just exactly the way

it goes around our house. Nicely done. I don't know enough about poetry to give constructive critism, but I can tell you that I liked it!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Save a horse, ride a cowboy. What a way to start the day. The writing was as playful as the subject matter.

ty,bd

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
you will improve

Unconstructive feedback and mindless praise are both meaningless. Both of your poems posted today are poorly written. Though I do believe you have potential. You are still learning. Try to avoid fantasy and erotica for awhile and start with something simple. Check out your environment, and think about your everyday life and what goes on in it. Write about that. Write about a man you see on the street or what you see outside your window. You should be able to make almost anything into poetry. Just describe what's in front of you.

cymrycymryover 18 years ago
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I shared this with my hubby. Thanks for the inspiration.

(grin)

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
WOW!

you have really come

into some word play

of what I have read of

you recently !!!

You are gaining the sweet

possession of sheer visual,

and this was no exception!

Enjoyed the ride !<grins>

-sGp-

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