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Mostly,


I'm the girl next door, who would
do anything to help anyone, with three kids
leaving me near hysteria. But mostly,

I'm the color yellow. Showing up
on your doorstep with oatmeal
cookies and a big glass
of ice cold milk. But mostly,

I'm your crafty grandmother,
who watches you. My wheels
turn and click, with an understanding
sentimental smile. But mostly,

I'm a wet nosed puppy. I love
to lay and play, then tickle your belly
with my silky soft hair. But mostly,

I'm the rain, falling in sensual drops
renourishing your wearisome soul
with hope. But mostly,

I'm a tiger, in your bed with rough housing
bounces, tough lil growls, and my claws
of devilish sin, scratch out a place
to make my mark. But mostly,

I'm a lemon. Sour and tart, squeezing
my way into your life. Pulping your heart
into an ooosshhhy, gooshey madness
of attraction and mirth. But mostly,

I'm a crack in the sidewalk, just waiting
to trip you up and make you see things,
feel everything as I do. But mostly,

I'm RhymeFairy. The lil pixie who spreads
my glittering of dusty words, all around.
Hoping to inspire you, love you, challenge
and lift you ... into my world, RhymeVille.
Where everything lost, is found.

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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesabout 16 years ago
MOSTLY...

this is my favorite of all your writes thus

far.,You let your guard down for a moment,

and let us see you for who you are, and WOW..

she is beautiful, you are beautiful,

with such wonderful usage of word and flow..

who could not be blown away by this..in this

search of soul lost/found piece.

*****mY fav*****

much love,

sGp

Many FeathersMany Feathersabout 16 years ago
Mostly

You're also a very sensual woman with a soul that desires to give of herself in ways that any man would (should) cherish. RF has a lusty playful side that she should allow to come out and play more often. Her words speak of depth, emotion, a serious side, as well as a playful one.

I hope to see more and more of the playful. Its worth the trip.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
Mostly - inspiring!

I mostly, not true, almost totally loved it. I could have been totally satisfied without the explication at the last stanza. "I am who I am" said God, and for the purpose of the poem you are its creator. But mostly, I found it (excuse the cliche) - inpiring!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
damn...

The first three stanzas were so good! This poem has promise! Keep going in the direction you started and get away from all that "I'm a tiger in bed" stuff. And the last stanza... no, no, no. I'm not trying to be rude, RF. I'm just a pissed off reader who was offered something good and I want more but I want what you offered in the beginning. Oh, and the lemon stanza isn't bad.

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