- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Mouse In The House
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Click hereThere's a mouse in the house
says my cranky ol' spouse
she's causing quite a fuss
sneaky lil' thing
slipped inside
found a place to hide
She's driving the ol' man crazy
think i'll call her Mazey
she scared the Tom across the street
funniest thing i ever seen
Saw her in the kitchen one day
as she came out to play
offered her a piece of meat
she said she'd prefer
a big red beet
Looked at her, my eyes crazed
she laughed, "Dont look so amazed"
glared at me with those beaty eyes
and twitched, "I fear i have a very bad itch"
"For the Jack next door
Him, i can't get enough,
i need more!
That rabbit is my bad habit
I just dig that furry bunny
and aim to make him my hunny"
I thought it hilarious
when she asked,
"Will you marry us?"
They made thier home out back
it was all really "whack"
Those two are quite a pair
wonder what kind of children
they will bear?
(orig. 2003 revised 2005)
- COMMENTS
sackalmost 19 years agoIt might be profitable to take a good hard look at the structure of this. It seems at times you are trying too hard to get words to rhyme, and the rhymes are not consistent throughout the structure. Sometimes you don't rhyme ending words at all, other times you have three rhyming words in one sentence. That makes reading the poem like driving over "speed bumps!" Your ideas are humorous, but perhaps a more consistent rhyming structure would improve the poems readability.
