Muse

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She is smoke, a wisp
of woman, of hope
and she becomes gossip

a cloud caught in the act
of escaping
an unwilling fist.

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 10 years ago

I usually prefer longer poems, nj, but this is so tightly constructed, I was left reading it over and over again.

I like the transfiguration, for lack of a better word, of the Muse from something ethereal to an almost compulsive "gossip" and "unwilling fist." That stopped me dead in my tracks.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
bru-

tell

6 lines and I had no idea where it was going

5,5,5ed

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
A cloud caught in the act

Of escapin'

An unwilling fist !!!

----- a slice of real life spliced into a poem : thnx for sharin !! 5-ed .

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