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Click hereShe is smoke, a wisp
of woman, of hope
and she becomes gossip
a cloud caught in the act
of escaping
an unwilling fist.
I usually prefer longer poems, nj, but this is so tightly constructed, I was left reading it over and over again.
I like the transfiguration, for lack of a better word, of the Muse from something ethereal to an almost compulsive "gossip" and "unwilling fist." That stopped me dead in my tracks.
Of escapin'
An unwilling fist !!!
----- a slice of real life spliced into a poem : thnx for sharin !! 5-ed .