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As i walk the dark road of my toughts

thinking of him and the pain he brought

thinkin of you and the joy you gave

i dream of you even in my wake

but all i have now is the memory

however bleak they seem
i still remember you vaguely

not your voice or your scent or your breath

but the depth of your innerself

your coldness so warm and innocent

your urges you control with finesse

the way you walk like a wooden hawk

Soaring high above its nest

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killamaidenkillamaidenover 10 years agoAuthor
TK U MLJ LV NV

hot

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
WHETHER IT BE ON SNOW, SAND OR RIPARIANS

the visons of you aloft on high, TK U MLJ LV NV

killamaidenkillamaidenover 10 years agoAuthor
oh wow

thanks guys. i taught if i did non erotic, itta be boring. but alas!

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

I think, of your work, I like this the best. Something in here reflects well the gap between what could have been and what is.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
taken me a while to

warm to your style, but this I really enjoyed this,

I hope the double space was purposeful because it helped add gravitas to each line,

the Sonic's in this line

"the way you walk like a wooden hawk"

when said aloud, awesome!