My all

I wrote this 3/22/01. My girlfriends read it and loved it. It's not just about sex -although that's certainly part of it, and originally the inspiration for writing it. But it became something more as it developed.
Sex can be one of the most incredible, most personal things between two people. I believe that making love is rare, and this poem is about making true love.

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I lay on my back while you mount me and take me deep, deep into another world.
There is no pain and I have everything to gain while I lay here listening to the rain.
Pounding, pounding, pounding down, inside me, all around me, everywhere I am.
The surf outside, inside, the wave that consumes me, consumes you, consumes all, pulling us down beneath the surface of ethereal love, joining.

A full moon, a full heart, a full body mind and soul, filled with your seed, your life.
The seed will take root, like the love in my heart, like a flame in the dark, shedding light.
Light to guide you to me, to my soul, to my body, where you can worship it, worship me.
An alter to pile with all that is sacred, all that is right, all that is wrong and worthy of correcting.

Correct me if I'm wrong, if I'm too honest and truthful, too forward about how I feel.
I feel you inside me, all around me, staring through me, through my eyes as if they were yours.
My body is yours, my heart is yours, my love is always, totally yours.
Totally aware of your warmth, your heartbeat, your touches, caresses and kisses, I am.

I am here, lying beneath you, wrapped around you, scouring your back as a flame would score a candle and the sun would scour the stars.
The stars that hang like diamonds, diamonds trapped in stones, stones that make the moon and the moon that gives us dreams.
Dreams of love, of passion, of feeling and aching and hurting with pain and happiness.
A happiness so complete, so free and giving and honest it could never be snuffed.

Nothing could snuff the flames, the sun, the light from the soul from the smile you gave me.
You gave me yourself, wrapped yourself around me, buried yourself inside me, spreading yourself, taking, giving yourself, your heart, your soul, your seed, your dream.
I dream of being beneath you, you mounted above me, above my body, my heart, my soul and ... my … mind.

You're all in my mind, spreading through me like a wildfire, like the blood through my veins, like the rain through the ocean and the waves crashing. A plague, destroying, wiping out everything, my love, my laughter, my smiles, my heart, my sorrow, my tears, my all that is good and bad, happy and sad.

You are my all, my everything, my complete.