My Ashes

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My ashes go
To India soon,
And I'm sorry
You can't too.

It's your uncles'
Job to take me there,
And pour me to
The God's.

Your grandmother
Needs looking after now,
Take care of her
For me.

My ashes go
To India soon,
I'll be with
My dad.

It's every Hindu's
Destiny, to be
Sacrificed to the
Holy water, running free.

My ashes go
To India soon,
You'll see me
Again one day.

I'll be born
Into another life
To try my
luck again.

My ashes go
To India soon,
You know it's
What i want.

I know you
Are trying to
Understand, but it
Takes some time.

My ashes go
To India soon,
I'll always be
With you.

From the day you
Were born,
Till the day your
Ashes go to India.

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darkerdreamerdarkerdreamerabout 17 years ago
Beautiful

Absolutely beautiful. I would be curious in knowing the tradition and history behind this piece. Please PM me some time if you'd like to discuss it.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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My ashes go to India soon... Good poem!