- Non-Erotic Poetry
- My Baby (Thug Cry)
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Click herebaby i'm just luck u let me get this close
and i'm thinkin dat cupid has shot his arrows though us both
this right here is much more than a lust thing
it's love so fuck da fighting and cursing
what u do to me i just can't explain
u got me feeling like i could take a shot from a AK-47 and feel no pain
i thought that u would be my wife right from the start
i'm thug it's hard to come straight from the heart
but not for u cuz u got me high like a dude on drugs
and it's not from sex it's from the kisses and hugs
i have been toithe play-offs a lot of times like Charles Barkley
but it's a championship between u and me
that means i don't want anymore of those Pretty Young Things
Baby give me your hand let put on this ring
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoI liked the rhyme of close and both... after that it just got too forced. Even with a performance poem, you got to watch your line lengths, you'll run out of breath before you can jamb that rhyme in there. Try it outloud and work on the lines that sound out of rhythm... The AK-47 line says something, but not very well, trim it down to the essentials only.
jim : )
