My Best Friend

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Looking deep inside of me
Afraid of what I'd really see

Knowing truth as it should be
As it whispers silently

Oh whisper wind, what do you say
Just accept, come what may

For I know hurt and I know pain
Without the two would be no gain

I lift my face up to the skies
To the heavens and greater highs

Open my heart and let it flow
Accept my strengths, my inner glow

Just keep walking through that door
When one closes, two open for

Me to walk my sacred path
Without regrets I won't look back

Keep my head high, vision level
With my wisdom I will revel

For all I am and all I'll be
This is my fate, my destiny

I've searched this life to be with you
To feel your love, your heartbeat true

To share the burden and the pain
To renew our love again

To be a part of half a whole
Is just a sad divided soul

To come together once again.
Oh how I've missed you
My best Friend..

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Corpse_riderCorpse_rideralmost 13 years ago
My, my

The stanza's in the first half were strong, but I felt poem drifted rather, after that, with some clunky lines.

eg:

To be a part of half a whole

Is just a sad divided soul

For all I am and all I'll be

This is my fate, my destiny

The idea was okay though.