- Non-Erotic Poetry
- my boyfriend god
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereforget that six day shit.
took an entire weekend just to do the nile.
nile's beautiful.
again, i feel insecure.
how can i compare
to a cloud,
a horizon,
a lizard?
i should have a tongue
that twists around my nipples.
"i wrote a poem today.
your stuff inspired me."
stuff?
"you know, silly,
like your trees and stuff."
i think that i shall never see
a poem lovely as a tree.
"that was kilmer,
not me.
you think i'm as pretty as a tree?"
yeah, sure honey.
you're a, um,
oak in my eyes.
"i'm screwing the guy next door."
i know.
copyright d. dixon
- COMMENTS
greenmountaineerabout 15 years agoIn the battle of the sexes, in the male encampment, I keep hearing in the back of my mind, "Say it ain't so" but an echo also keeps coming back, "Ain't it the truth?"
I chuckled all day over this poem.
WickedEveabout 15 years agoAuthorYes, Ange, this one of the poems that's going through puberty. lol It has a bad attitude and bit of peach fuzz under its arms.
Angelineabout 15 years agobut it's a good poem though kind of different from what you usually write. I couldn't figure it out for a minute and then I realized that this poem projects less confidence than I usually see from you. I'm guessing it was written more on pure emotion that what you usually write. But don't get me wrong; it's good--just different for you. And btw, you did a nice job of conveying conversation between the italics and the quote marks. :-)
Anonymousabout 15 years agoGreat! I love dialogue mixed in a poem when done correctly and you did it.
