- Erotic Poetry
- My Breath Deceives Me
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Click hereMy Breath Deceives Me
I look at you, and my heart stops.
I feel the torment inside, twisting, longing, needing.
A sly look, a small smile, and my eyes begin to glow.
I avoid you when I can, but I am drawn like the Tiger to fresh meat....
I long to taste you again, to feel your heaviness after climax...
My love will forever be trapped in a vortex of confusion over you.
- COMMENTS
flyguy69over 19 years agoYou introduce an interesting idea with the title, but don't develop it in the poem. How does your breath trick you? I think you are onto something clever here, but need to work on this one some more.
