my daddys knife

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sheila got her shot of tequila and goes
you know whenever i see a mans cock
i always think about my daddys knife

he used to sit me right on his lap and
then he would slowly pull that thing out
of its snug handjobbed rawhide casing

the leather smelled just like heather
she confesses as she takes the drink
and tosses it down her lovely throat

she is lost in the flush of alcohol and
the erotic rush of sharpened steel as
it peels free from its hugging sheath

he used to pour oil all over the shaft
and wipe with smooth slow strokes
until it was as polished as a mirror

when he touched it flat to my tummy
slapped the cold steel to my soft stomach
our faces danced up and down the blade

the inherent danger of its razored tip
as he scratched my vulnerable belly with
the hard smooth prick of my daddys knife.


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tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
The duality

of the content sets up nice dramatic tension. I was thinking maybe flipping inherent and danger might work more effectively. (but what do I know?) Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful!

So erotic with no obviousness. The best kind of eroticism. A great read!

(Anonymous, maybe you should stop reading the poetry here, you're going to have a heart attack - hopefully.)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Wow

erotic and seductive and oh, so dangerous. I like this.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
you're disgusting

oh, steve, you are disgusting, baby. lol

This is good poetry. Edgy stuff. I like it.

There's nothing disgusting or dirty in this poem. It just makes you feel that way when you read it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
You're disgusting.

You're an ugly sick bastard who's a fake hypnotist and needs to go to hell.

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