My Dream Last Night

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steves_mom
steves_mom
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I was lost
Amidst a sea of cardboard boxes
Full of things that didn't matter.

A broken Wiffle bat,
A rolled-up map of the world,
Boxes and boxes of heavy, hardcover books.
Textbooks, maybe. Probably obsolete by now,
But they must come too.

And the matriarch barks orders.
Pack the treasures carefully.
I lovingly wrap the empty bottles and
Long-forgotten games with pieces missing.
I can't leave anything behind.

This goes in this car.
That goes in that car.
Buy why? Aren't they going to the same place?
Is the mode of transportation so important?
I ask the matriarch, but she doesn't answer.

My hands are in my hair. I walk in circles.
The boxes pile up. They all look the same.
Why does it matter? Why does any of it matter?
The deadline approaches. Work faster! Work faster!
The matriarch calls for more boxes.

And I woke up.
And I did it my way.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
:)

I didn't really like it when I was reading through it but the last line makes it all come together.

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Neat package

And you wrote this your way. Audio delivery was top class, too. In fact, a neat package all round. Now where's the box?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Five Stars

I usually do not follow poetry, let alone non erotic poetry. But after your audio story a few weeks ago, I found myself wanting to her more of your voice. Your voice is a smooth and flowing as the words you write.

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
I like your style

Did your way get all the treasure to their destination in one piece? I suspect so

5ed