My lady loves pink lilies
She likes how nice they smell
My lady loves big willies
She likes to go and tell
My lady loves to brag
No matter what about
My lady loves to nag
And if not she will pout
My lady loves to sing
She's not that bad you know
So I got her a nice ring
And put on quite a show
And on one knee I said
Darling will you marry me?
She put her arms around my head
Yes! She yelled with glee
So know we live quite happily
Together with our daughter Lily
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A CONTINUATION OF HIS LAST SUBMISSION
my lady and the tramp. TK U MLJ LV NV
Short and Sweet
This poem is nice, short and sweet. It's a little bit funny and romantic. Your technique is quite sloppy but the idea is good I think. Work on your poetry and you have a lot of potential to go far with it!more...
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