- Non-Erotic Poetry
- My Love For You
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Click hereMy love for you burned so bright
For it felt so right
Forever held me through the night
My love for you was the light
My love for you was worth the fight
burned blinding my sight
hurt with all my might
My love for you held the honor of a knight
My love for you was too bright
only for a time was right
left me cold through night
My love for you showed me the light
My love for you flew high as a kite
pure and held no fright
t'was a great flight
My love for you taught me to write!
du lac May 2004
- COMMENTS
sackover 19 years agoLike you were trying too hard to get the words to rhyme. The structure restricts you to a small pool of rhyming words, which is what gives the poem a less spontaneous quality.
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoYour poem was shining bright
took me on a mental flight
sittin by the computer light
reading poems before night night
I just thought you might
want to know, your poem I liked~
