- Erotic Poetry
- My Man
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Click hereMy Man.
Legs, long and strong,
Like thick tree trunks rooted in rich fire blacken soil.
My Man.
I will kneel before you.
With the face of a child,
And body of a deity woman.
I stare up at you and feel my dark eyes being filled with the wisdom of your gray eyed stare.
My Man.
I reach up for your member.
A river of blue veins running across its long landscape.
I taste the silver drops of its salty dew.
My Man.
To take you inside my mouth,
To taste you as you tower over me.
My Man.
Take me as you teach me.
Care for me,
As I will care for you.
My Man.
I want to feel you fill me.
Stretch me wide.
My head thrashes from side to side.
My Man.
Release yourself inside of me,
As your strong hands hold me in my place.
Oh, My Man.
I am yours.
Take me as you want me.
As I need you to.
My Man.
- COMMENTS
WickedEveabout 19 years agoThe repetition of "My man" is very erotic in this piece.
And there are some good lines like:
"thick tree trunks rooted in rich fire blacken soil."
"A river of blue veins running across its long landscape."
This poem could be tightened up some. It has a lot of potential. Thanks for sharing.
skip.69about 19 years agoQuite a good poem for your first submission. Can we look forward to more contributions?
