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there is a weight
to the silence we share
heavier than words

it pulls us in towards a common core
leaning until foreheads rest.

With God as my realtor, I swear
I live in that silence
still


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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 20 years ago
Fantastic

"With God as my realtor, I swear" this line jars me, like a finger snap in a trance. Very nice effect.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
plus 4

as a child, gravity was God.

now a more simple idea

surrounds my "lost kingdom theory."

you are growing dangerously close

echoes_sechoes_sabout 20 years ago
Very

hauntingly accurate and spikes home in the heart :rose:

laelialaeliaabout 20 years ago
I feel this...

more than I want to - as if the person I am thinking of is speaking directly to me. Listening closer to the silence now...

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
Wow

left me speechless.

I can feel this to my core

Thank you

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