My opiate

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todski28
todski28
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As I enter you I forget me
The lie that is the past
Memories that torture
Mental pain like shearing flesh and fractured bones

You allow me to forget the future
The stress of plans, management
Employees, deadlines
Thoughts of death

I am free of the pain from the past
Drugged by you
No more thoughts of the future
Free to revel in the now

For is not the now all we truly have?
As I slide into you I forget me
And enjoy the union of us

todski28
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todski28todski28over 10 years agoAuthor
As always your suggestions are welcome

I debated leaving that whole last line out, I think back and think that I should have done that.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
strong sentiments

"And enjoy the union of us" is a little rough to my ear, might it read ..."and enjoy our union" ?

just a suggestion